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Latest revision as of 20:49, 4 April 2026

Scratch Pad

Additional
- flat additions to the base value
- sum with each other
Percent Increased/Reduced the base value
- Percent change
Percent More/Less the modified value
- Applied after increased/reduced

Sum all Added and Base values -> 10
Sum all Increased into one multiplier -> 1.45
Multiply Added/Base total x Increased multiplier ->10x1.45=14.5
Multiply by each More separately -> 14.5 x 1.05 x 1.3 x 1.1 = 21.77
Multiply by Amplified separately

Naval Combat

Long Range (up to 250,000 km) -- lasers + railguns
Missile Range (up to 1,000,000 km)
Close range (under 20,000 km) --ion beams

    *ion beams are short range, but cause massive internal thermal and radiation effects.

Marine Hierarchy

Fire Team
Squad
Platoon
Company
Battalion
Regiment
Brigade (1st Sylvan Marines)
Division

navy will perform air cavalry and troop transport role with gunships. I need to flesh out the marine recon role.

Increase the length of the prologue, to have more fleeing, near death experiences, etc.,

Add the character artwork as commissions prior to a design change for the uniforms. They'll serve as bonus artwork on the special edition hardcovers.
Here is a list of characters

Here is a list of warships

Here are the Species and Professions.

http://robertplewis.com/index.php/Category:Naval_Weapons

http://robertplewis.com/index.php/System_Titles

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-navy will perform air cavalry and troop transport role with gunships. I need to flesh out the marine recon role.
+*Additional
+**flat additions to the base value
+**sum with each other
+*Percent Increased/Reduced the base value
+**Percent change
+*Percent More/Less the modified value
+**Applied after increased/reduced
-Increase the length of the prologue, to have more fleeing, near death experiences, etc.,
-<br>
-Here is a list of [[:Category:Characters|characters]]
-Here is a list of [[:Category:Terran Warship|warships]]
+#Sum all Added and Base values -> 10
+#Sum all Increased into one multiplier -> 1.45
+#Multiply Added/Base total x Increased multiplier ->10x1.45=14.5
+#Multiply by each More separately -> 14.5 x 1.05 x 1.3 x 1.1 = 21.77
+#Multiply by Amplified separately
-Here are the [[Races and Professions|Races and Professions]].
-http://robertplewis.com/index.php/Category:Naval_Weapons
+===Naval Combat===
+*Long Range (up to 250,000 km) -- lasers + railguns
+*Missile Range (up to 1,000,000 km)
+*Close range (under 20,000 km) --ion beams
-*need a page to promote artists.
+     *ion beams are short range, but cause massive internal thermal and radiation effects.
-http://robertplewis.com/index.php/System_Titles
+===Marine Hierarchy===
+*Fire Team
+*Squad
+*Platoon
+*Company
+*Battalion
+*Regiment
+*Brigade (1st Sylvan Marines)
+*Division
-=The Blessed Son Outline=
-== Act 1 – Setup / Descent (≈ 0–25%) ==
-Ordinary World → Inciting Incident → Plot Point 1 (Forced withdrawal into isolation/risk)
-=== Descent Phase – Broken Network & Abdication ===
-* '''Familial/Social Network Breaks / Pleas Ignored, Power Abdicated'''
-**Prologue: Conor witnesses the beginning of the apocalypse while riding a bus. Katy, Kaylee, and McKenna follow him into a sporting goods store, then accompany him as they flee outside of cities in an attempt to stay away from the monsters. They're eventually surrounded and killed.
-*'''Plot Point 1 (End of Act 1):'''
+navy will perform air cavalry and troop transport role with gunships. I need to flesh out the marine recon role.
-**Conor and his found family find themselves in a deity's lobby where they're introduced to their new lives.
-=== Act 1 Summary ===
+Increase the length of the prologue, to have more fleeing, near death experiences, etc.,
-The act establishes the protagonist's familiar world, then shatters it through a network break. Emotional arc: From superficial security to forced vulnerability and loss of agency. Key shift: Involuntary isolation launches the journey.
-== Act 2 – Confrontation / Search (≈ 25–75%) ==
+Add the character artwork as commissions prior to a design change for the uniforms. They'll serve as bonus artwork on the special edition hardcovers.
-Rising action, gathering allies, trials → Midpoint shift → Dark Night low
+<br>
+Here is a list of [[:Category:Characters|characters]]
-=== Search Phase – Isolation, Risk, Rebuilding Attempts ===
+Here is a list of [[:Category:Terran Warship|warships]]
-* '''Isolation, Danger, Risk'''
-  ** Chapter/Scene ideas here
-* '''Search & Disguise/Subversion'''
+Here are the [[Species and Professions|Species and Professions]].
-  ** Chapter/Scene ideas here
-  ** Midpoint (~50%): Key ally or realization shifts focus from solo struggle to networked progress.
-* '''Attempt to Rebuild Community'''
+http://robertplewis.com/index.php/Category:Naval_Weapons
-  ** Chapter/Scene ideas here
-'''Plot Point 2 / Dark Night (End of Act 2):'''
+http://robertplewis.com/index.php/System_Titles
-Lowest point. The new network falters, old wounds reopen, or a major compromise appears impossible. The protagonist faces the threat of total isolation or collective failure.
-=== Act 2 Summary ===
-The act centers on searching and fragile alliance-building amid escalating stakes. Emotional arc: From reactive isolation to proactive connection-building, peaking at hope then crashing into despair. Key shift: The dark night tests trust and reliance on others.
-== Act 3 – Resolution / Ascent (≈ 75–100%) ==
-Climax → Negotiated Victory → New Equilibrium
-=== Ascent Phase – Success, Negotiation, New Network ===
-* '''Success in the Search'''
-  ** Chapter/Scene ideas here
-* '''Negotiations & Compromises That Benefit All'''
-  ** Chapter/Scene ideas here
-* '''New Network Re-Established (Altered Form)'''
-  ** Chapter/Scene ideas here
-'''Final Image / Return:'''
-The protagonist exists within a renewed, thriving network, viewing the world through the lens of connection. Peace is achieved through unity.
-=== Act 3 Summary ===
-The act delivers collective triumph and restoration. Emotional arc: From despair to empowered unity and hope. Key shift: Victory reinforces that true strength lies in interdependence; the community is transformed.
-== Quick 3-Act Beat Summary ==
-{| class="wikitable" style="width:100%;"
-! Act !! Key Beat
-|-
-| Act 1 || Hook
-|-
-| Act 1 || Inciting Incident (Network Break)
-|-
-| Act 1 || End Act 1 (Isolation Begins)
-|-
-| Act 2 || Midpoint (Network Building Shifts)
-|-
-| Act 2 || End Act 2 (Dark Night of Network Threat)
-|-
-| Act 3 || Climax (Collective Victory)
-|-
-| Act 3 || Resolution (New Network)
-|}